tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post824591926527729328..comments2009-10-02T17:17:10.066+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-13210998520997121882009-10-02T17:17:10.066+05:302009-10-02T17:17:10.066+05:30Old Mcdonald&#39;s format?<br />interesting.kochuthresiamma p .jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01320086308375078739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-90494041416772264342009-07-01T15:42:12.849+05:302009-07-01T15:42:12.849+05:30Adnyani Varavadekar.<br />So,please well come in Hotel Dreamland Inn Beach Resort &amp; enjoy a great happiness kokan tour.<br />So,preservation of natural beauty in the kokan region,full of facilities &amp; happiness giving experience which is one &amp; only tourist center.<br />www.dreamlandinn.com<br />9423296526<br />02358205297Adnyani Varavadekarhttp://www.dreamlandinn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-42827380546035170322009-05-29T17:34:10.116+05:302009-05-29T17:34:10.116+05:30First time saw this blog. A nice blog indeed. I don't belong to this space. But, I can say that you have substance and the writing is simple and touching.<br /><br />Good Luck.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-86128995902271134612009-05-29T14:54:58.791+05:302009-05-29T14:54:58.791+05:30@extremity : its raining here as well now.. :)<br /><br />@Kaltari: Thanks man..Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-49888752751781254122009-05-29T13:17:20.774+05:302009-05-29T13:17:20.774+05:30Definitely one of your best!<br /><br />Beautiful use of words- hats of to your imagination man! Keep up the good work.Pradeep Kaltarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08030264723525465661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-13841903628882488562009-05-19T15:32:00.000+05:302009-05-19T15:32:00.000+05:30oh ! hw hw late i read this..u knw wat..its raining here nw<br /><br />Splat,Croak,Rock ,Squeak and hoot,<br />together they play a lovely band,<br />A tune which soothes<br />A tune with life<br />A tune of joy with hope unbound..<br /><br />true..extremityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05713163060672882686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-76046717614779659462009-04-27T16:23:00.000+05:302009-04-27T16:23:00.000+05:30@ ANorak: Nice to hear it brought memories back.. :)<br /><br />@Alotus : Thanks for visiting my blog and for your comment.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-33891343256756332112009-04-21T23:19:00.000+05:302009-04-21T23:19:00.000+05:30Well, it's been a while since I've read any poems with this much alliteration and onomatopoeia involved, but I really did enjoy this very much. Thank you for sharing and for stopping by my poetry LJ! My apologies for taking so long to respond to you as I was busy with school and work, but I want to return the favor. :)alotus-poetryhttp://alotus-poetry.livejournal.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-40874883944926175692009-04-08T16:55:00.000+05:302009-04-08T16:55:00.000+05:30I agree with Balachandran....it does sound like a nursery poem....I remembered my nursery days....and those poems which we used to recite....nice post....keep walking!!!Anorakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06507958743875516328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-67283136271983077362009-03-31T15:27:00.000+05:302009-03-31T15:27:00.000+05:30@Vipi: Thanks lot.. Criticism is good.. :) .. I love when people criticize so that next time I try better than previous.. :)<BR/><BR/>@Manja: Thanks man.. Rain does bring many pleasant memories...<BR/><BR/>@Dreamer: thank you...Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-60564261922082495462009-03-31T15:19:00.000+05:302009-03-31T15:19:00.000+05:30nice poem...loved you experiment with sound...keep writing!!dreamerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14418977311724501300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-73959568213700846442009-03-31T14:34:00.000+05:302009-03-31T14:34:00.000+05:30rain is an evergreen topic for poems... nice composition macha... :)Manjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-56147127116201080972009-03-30T07:06:00.000+05:302009-03-30T07:06:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.future mantrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13227238503050822340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-66724999071699282912009-03-29T10:31:00.000+05:302009-03-29T10:31:00.000+05:30Good One Man...Some people already have a tendency to criticize anything and everthing in this world...So, never mind what others say...Keep writing...Congratz....:)vipihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04620844508048449206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-48977150536086453862009-03-28T10:57:00.000+05:302009-03-28T10:57:00.000+05:30@Mohita: I am glad u like it... :)<BR/><BR/>@Tony: Thank u thank u... Cafe writng sthalam kollam<BR/><BR/>@Bala: Thanks a lot for visiting. And many thanks for the kind words.. Though i am not sure i would like to induce any kind of medical condition on the reader.. heheRahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-23315402157137952832009-03-28T08:14:00.000+05:302009-03-28T08:14:00.000+05:30i should have visited u earlier! Your poem has the charm of old nursery rhymes - in a deeper level, the lines show the sharp awareness and observation of the surroundings - highly visual and pleasing to the senses. <BR/>The reader leaves your page with a gentle smile and BP a few count lowered!balachandran vhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10174364716507089780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-6709799552116896462009-03-26T12:11:00.000+05:302009-03-26T12:11:00.000+05:30kidilam da! :)<BR/>nerathe vaayichirunnu! ee post-il ninnu nere cafe writing-il poyi aviduthe kaaryangal okke anveshicha thirakkil commentaan marannu :(<BR/><BR/>Ninakku pattiya pani DW-il Alla! :)Tonyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14716838424153576869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-91080458810014153542009-03-25T21:02:00.000+05:302009-03-25T21:02:00.000+05:30Bravo!<BR/>Kudos to you.<BR/>I am glad that I read it.<BR/>Superb choice of words.Mohitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10440374834140564968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-23781305201777366282009-03-22T22:11:00.000+05:302009-03-22T22:11:00.000+05:30@anirudh: thanks a lot..<BR/><BR/>@binu: thank u.. ellarvarkkum ee shabdangal kelkkumbol oro ormakal varum... :) <BR/><BR/>@rahul: thanks for the visit mate..<BR/>composing me.. people say i music hasnt gone miles near me... tried penning somelyrics way back in college for something we ourselves did.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-7251412778907428272009-03-22T20:21:00.000+05:302009-03-22T20:21:00.000+05:30nice poem..especially the tune stuff.ever thought about composing :Prahulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07675962505129911588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-31358327270146584512009-03-21T12:39:00.000+05:302009-03-21T12:39:00.000+05:30rhythm kollam... pinne athu konduvarunna oramakalum...Binuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02975411641093636355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-49902971487703993342009-03-20T19:31:00.000+05:302009-03-20T19:31:00.000+05:30nice tuning...liked itAnirudh induchudanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17674811204698676688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-56716282041746676332009-03-20T15:05:00.000+05:302009-03-20T15:05:00.000+05:30@Priya: You have written a blog post yourself.<BR/>I didnt understand what you meant by the first two lines.<BR/>Thanks for the huge list of things not good and good.. correction great :)<BR/>I will surely consider them next time... :)<BR/><BR/>@Vatsa: Yes its different than the rest. I tires to make a proper poem this time.. :)<BR/><BR/>@Indu : Hands Up. That verse is actually better than mine.. And about the slap. I didnt like that line.. :)<BR/>And thanks a lot for the - "Good Work!!"Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-40228954742462614562009-03-20T14:57:00.000+05:302009-03-20T14:57:00.000+05:30Clappity clappity clappity Clap!<BR/>But I feel like giving you a real tight slap.<BR/>The frogs did croak and the thunder roar,<BR/>But you made me miss them even more.<BR/><BR/><BR/>The poem 'feels' straight out of my English Reader .. farmhouse door , brown old barn owl..brought back a lot of memories besides that of the rain.<BR/><BR/>Good work!!Induhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02739925074766491724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-18502837994024089722009-03-20T12:10:00.000+05:302009-03-20T12:10:00.000+05:30This is somewhat different than the rest - bcos the first line always explain about the sound, and then it goes deeper - about the one that makes the sound n what it's doing...<BR/><BR/>as usual, you know that i am weak in english...and so I didn't understand some parts here n there...he he..:DSrivatsa K Rhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.com