tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post8074791650276294571..comments2009-10-21T15:10:08.018+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-54706929101597224662009-10-21T15:10:08.018+05:302009-10-21T15:10:08.018+05:30Beautifully written. I read through your other poems on the indiblogger nomination. Loved the &#39;sound of rain&#39; piece. It was after a long time that I read something so lucid. You have a way with words and thoughts. Keep up the good work.Saurabhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09534658936683611453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-32065931531652890262008-10-27T14:44:00.000+05:302008-10-27T14:44:00.000+05:30hey man, when did you write this? you didn't send the link at all??<BR/><BR/>btw, awesome composition...as usual, your poem has that suspense till the end...i didn't even know you were talking about a shadow till i read the last line...<BR/><BR/>read the poem once again and you have given a perfect description everywhere...Srivatsa K Rhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-55725163252516806682008-10-27T13:59:00.000+05:302008-10-27T13:59:00.000+05:30@Bharath : Thanks a lot man.<BR/><BR/>@Rakesh: Thanks for the visit. Thanks a lot.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-48849943722310529552008-10-24T14:40:00.000+05:302008-10-24T14:40:00.000+05:30Amazing lines there! Very well written with a very clear thought! <BR/><BR/>I was stumped in the end! Superb<BR/><BR/>Cheers<BR/><BR/>Rakesh<BR/>http://almostsunday.blogspot.comRakesh Vanamalihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03918768913569739758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-54078078475316087392008-10-23T09:55:00.000+05:302008-10-23T09:55:00.000+05:30nice one dude!!Bharath R Shttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06708546714328201388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-44454869310556967462008-10-19T18:10:00.000+05:302008-10-19T18:10:00.000+05:30@maverrik: thnaks man.. black and white just meant colourless.. in monochrome..<BR/><BR/>@thank you sailor..<BR/><BR/>@Priya: thanks..<BR/>btw the cup is some image i got off the internet so credit gooes to whoever made it.. :)<BR/><BR/>@Manja : So true.. there is a saying , who needs a friend who walks with you all the while but is f no good.. for that i have my shadowRahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-64862779579891825232008-10-18T17:06:00.000+05:302008-10-18T17:06:00.000+05:30Hmm....<BR/>Wakes with you and follows you<BR/>Doesnt abandon you in dismal times as others do... <BR/>Cries with you, laughs with you...<BR/>The only best friend which is always for you and only you.... <BR/>Dear shadow...!!!Manjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-60433923558000623812008-10-17T19:22:00.000+05:302008-10-17T19:22:00.000+05:30i liked the thought process.. but not all the paragraphs.. third one is great.. otherwise its fine..<BR/><BR/>the idea is common but the third paragraph makes it a very great read...<BR/><BR/>keep it up..<BR/><BR/>fyi.. the feed image in the cup is good.. very nice and imaginative.Priyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13631520052293520539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-78106106351104926632008-10-16T22:03:00.000+05:302008-10-16T22:03:00.000+05:30good onethe stygian sailorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14111652720471377986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-73594715920570151792008-10-16T11:05:00.000+05:302008-10-16T11:05:00.000+05:30<I>Dark, a fiend;<BR/>Light, a friend;<BR/>A man at dawn,<BR/>A child at noon,<BR/>And again a man, <BR/>At sundown.</I><BR/><BR/>Loved this paragh.. Describes the three phases of one's shadow on any given day. And the metaphorical reference to man and child is just too good..<BR/><BR/>But I did not understand why you say 'black and white'. Where's the white?Maverrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09950913670610398632noreply@blogger.com