tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post6873789397088908901..comments2007-10-16T11:40:15.544+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-49886173733736454942007-10-16T11:40:00.000+05:302007-10-16T11:40:00.000+05:30@chandan:<BR/>thanks,man... i did think about it a lot...<BR/><BR/>@srivatsa:<BR/>Thnks for the advice man... I am tring to follow your advice each and every time...'<BR/>I am a novice in writing poems.. The rhyming is o grab the readers attention and to make the flow of words smooth...<BR/>That is just one technique,,.. but there ae lots of other things which can be done also... apprently i am not a master o any of those...Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-39905723025479151112007-10-12T21:23:00.000+05:302007-10-12T21:23:00.000+05:30Good one dude!!!<BR/><BR/>you have used the personification superbly!!!way to go..<BR/><BR/>Although i could not find any flaw in this poem, i just want to suggest you that it is not necessary that the ending words of each line to be rhythmic...If you are not concentrating on that too much and if it is coming naturally, then fine...else, let the poem flow naturally as it comes to your mind...dont worry about rhyming words...Srivatsa aka Chidduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-73547549934279811042007-10-04T22:45:00.000+05:302007-10-04T22:45:00.000+05:30Hmmm.. I always had a thought that mountains are very feminine parts of Mother Earth. I think I had read that somewhere. But you have given a whole new dimension to it. Very creative, very poetic and loads of thoughts has gone into this. I truly admire your ability to correlate seemingly unrelated things. The only thing I found a little off is the tenses in the last two paraghs. They were a little mixed up.Chandanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09950913670610398632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-2236952150483263222007-10-03T20:57:00.000+05:302007-10-03T20:57:00.000+05:30@jobsy<BR/>Thank you ..thank you<BR/>@bharath<BR/>thanks dude<BR/>@manja<BR/>thanx for the good comments manRahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-68653461726500029272007-10-03T18:15:00.000+05:302007-10-03T18:15:00.000+05:30Enjoying the nature with poetic sense... good one..Manjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-57462003790697384502007-10-02T22:22:00.000+05:302007-10-02T22:22:00.000+05:30Dude very well composed poem!!!<BR/>good it was very good to read!!!Bharath R Shttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06708546714328201388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-34840186483045970972007-10-02T16:08:00.000+05:302007-10-02T16:08:00.000+05:30a subtle post.. very fine indeed!!Jobsyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10915590814721475467noreply@blogger.com