tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post6094157702771355789..comments2009-01-19T22:12:50.958+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-45813326054320457602009-01-19T22:12:00.000+05:302009-01-19T22:12:00.000+05:30ayyo sorry da last line athra shradhichilla... :) (nee oru ohenry aavumennu vichaarichilla) kidilam one again... :)Georgynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-41570451592484916312008-10-29T17:55:00.000+05:302008-10-29T17:55:00.000+05:30@Malakhan AKA BLUMBAN: Thanks... Such stories will continue to happen in real life.. till people find some common sense...<BR/><BR/>@Srivatsa: Thanks man.. I read it with he and she interchnaged :).. But i cant say he approached gracefully... a man is seldom graceful... :)Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-38370283321833921152008-10-27T14:49:00.000+05:302008-10-27T14:49:00.000+05:30cool stuff dude...but as far as i know, a train is a "He"...probably, ships and airplanes are "she"s...<BR/><BR/>imagine the reversal of roles of Hes and Shes in your article...;)...He coming to take her life...i somewhat feel that would sound better..Srivatsa K Rhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-84037421016522429422008-10-14T15:54:00.000+05:302008-10-14T15:54:00.000+05:30it took some time to realize the beauty of the story. I was blind when I read it first. When I opend my eyes it was nice, might be the story of one of my senior who left us .മാലാഖന്‍ | Malaghanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624690710376291293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-73917589159619171882008-10-13T12:11:00.000+05:302008-10-13T12:11:00.000+05:30@manja: literally speaking all vehicles are females..;)<BR/><BR/>@maverrick: thanks man. The guys just a guy who wants to suicide. One of many who lie wainting for a train<BR/>The Fatal Sin refers to Suicide. Taking ones God given life is a sin and it is fatal too. :)<BR/><BR/>@Indu: thanks for the encouragement again.. :)Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-65657188440093864102008-10-13T11:39:00.000+05:302008-10-13T11:39:00.000+05:30That was good( think I start all my comments this way ;) ). You managed to keep the suspense alive till the last line and it all makes perfect sense too..Induhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02739925074766491724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-82434677859160659632008-10-11T02:59:00.000+05:302008-10-11T02:59:00.000+05:30actually paranjaal njan 2-3 thavana vaayichu. avasaanam vayanakkariyute manodharmam pole njan ath theevandiyaanennu manassilaakki.. But that actually made me confuse and think a lot...പെണ്‍കൊടിhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05062128536423001216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-55348492185025135722008-10-10T19:04:00.000+05:302008-10-10T19:04:00.000+05:30yeah.. got it only after i read ur reply to manja..<BR/><BR/>@Rahule: Good one, though I din't understand whom you are referring to when you say <I>"He lie there; waiting in anticipation; butterflies in his stomach"</I>. A Suicide? Who?<BR/><BR/>@manja: of course train is female. The fact that it carries so many passengers in its belly is proof enough ;DMaverrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09950913670610398632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-21823034691727694872008-10-10T18:26:00.000+05:302008-10-10T18:26:00.000+05:30Ohh i think i just overlooked the last line when i read it first...!! :(<BR/>Its a train macha...!! Hmmm... but temme hw do u know train is a female..!! hehee :) Good one man... If it were not for the last line i would have to read again to understand it.. :PManjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-82091168633876822572008-10-10T18:21:00.000+05:302008-10-10T18:21:00.000+05:30@penkodi: aaa ezhuthiyathellam post cheytholloo .. njan kuthi irunnu vaayicholam...<BR/>pinne , ninackke sathyamaayittum ithu manasilaayo? <BR/><BR/>@Georgy : aliya sathyamaayittum onnum manasilaayille? aaa potte vere aaarkkenkilum manasilaavunundo ennu nockkatte...<BR/><BR/>@Manja: Sorry man, its absolutely not what i meant.. hmm.. seems it was quite tough to understand. But I thought the last line was enough to explain everything.<BR/>Lemme see if someone else understands it.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-56868084086951598802008-10-10T18:12:00.000+05:302008-10-10T18:12:00.000+05:30Are you personifying death as a lady.. If so why did she leave him without killing him... and why did he want to die.... this is how i understood...!! did u mean to convey something else...!!! :)Manjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-11606271775557248962008-10-10T11:25:00.000+05:302008-10-10T11:25:00.000+05:30enikkonnum manasilaayillede... :(Georgynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-17442109816321628892008-10-09T02:12:00.000+05:302008-10-09T02:12:00.000+05:30Ippo dufaai ottakathe karakkal nirthi njan blog vayana thudangi. kurachu ezhuthum.. aadyam vayichu onnum pidikittaathond enik veendum vayikkendi vannutto.. :-പെണ്‍കൊടിhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05062128536423001216noreply@blogger.com