tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post4710251143256860639..comments2008-11-24T11:00:49.255+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-64348812677504097402008-11-24T11:00:00.000+05:302008-11-24T11:00:00.000+05:30@Sailor : Yup, i don write poems much nowadays.. I dont get good enough expressions to convert to poems..<BR/>Ya !!! u wrote about death i wrote about life and happiness.. Its really amazing.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-34758552148115231042008-11-22T21:50:00.000+05:302008-11-22T21:50:00.000+05:30oh, poetry<BR/>you don't do much of this these days do you?<BR/>nice lines. <BR/>it is amazing isn't it, how we can write diametrically opposite things on the same subject?the stygian sailorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14111652720471377986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-88303893871194362712008-07-14T16:58:00.000+05:302008-07-14T16:58:00.000+05:30@ thanks eli... But you have to give me permission to view your blog.. :`(<BR/><BR/>@@Bhilai : Ezhuthaamm... Pakshe nee vayikkanam... its my resolution to kill people using poems..<BR/>:)Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-21828204364253157912008-07-09T14:15:00.000+05:302008-07-09T14:15:00.000+05:30Eda machu...ne puli aanallo!!! Keep writing such beautiful poems...Jitesh Nambiarnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-13063197039204472532008-07-09T14:12:00.000+05:302008-07-09T14:12:00.000+05:30hey rahul, awesome poem...<BR/><BR/>then kudos to chandan for that commentElizabeth Josephnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-54823113139961233512008-06-20T10:10:00.000+05:302008-06-20T10:10:00.000+05:30@manja: t5hx for dropping by, as for writing about aliens i leave that to you. Write about your Alien love man...Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-10956606393007993222008-06-11T15:48:00.000+05:302008-06-11T15:48:00.000+05:30Hmmm... finally reading ur poem da... good one... butterfly is lucky that u r writing a poem on it... :P Continue writing on other animals and birds and even on aliens..!!!! :PManjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-27388686985974667482008-05-13T22:14:00.000+05:302008-05-13T22:14:00.000+05:30@chandan: wow man.. your words are a thousand times better than mine... thank youRahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-65457897161792993382008-05-13T21:22:00.000+05:302008-05-13T21:22:00.000+05:30Wonder I do,what would happen next,<BR/>Would he continue his journey unswathed?<BR/>Till he reaches the zenith of his time in this place,<BR/>Each flower a memory to replace.<BR/>Boy am i jealous of it's ways,<BR/>Of the missing wrinkles on its hide,<BR/>And the wonderful rejoice in it's stride,<BR/>Such lovely poems you do write,<BR/>Lifts up my spirits oh so bright!<BR/>Brings back memories of those good ol' days,<BR/>All those years of brimful plays,<BR/>Keep writing such lovely poems ma friend,<BR/>Coz help they do, broken spirits to mend...Chandanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09950913670610398632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-55159548723168492222008-05-13T09:46:00.000+05:302008-05-13T09:46:00.000+05:30Thanks guys for commenting even though it is a headache to comment.<BR/><BR/>@Vasta: Thanx man. I wanted to keep it as simple as possible. Plain writing , nothing out of the ordinary... <BR/>@Jobsy: thanx macha<BR/>@micky: thank you for reading the poem and for such a lovely comment.<BR/>@Kaltari:I didnt want the punch, man.<BR/>Thanks for reading through and and more for posting your valuable comment.Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-56343065850613759122008-05-12T22:15:00.000+05:302008-05-12T22:15:00.000+05:30Beautiful poem! Nice use of words. <BR/><BR/>As Srivatsa said: "very easy for illiterates like us understand it" :)<BR/><BR/>But I felt the ending part didn't give that PUNCH as the rest of the poem did, I think you could have modified it a li'l bit.Pradeep Kaltarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08030264723525465661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-81962224550889766642008-05-12T17:23:00.000+05:302008-05-12T17:23:00.000+05:30Lovely Poem. Good Writing. :-)Mickyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01651744391043582918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-60059178688159160202008-05-12T17:15:00.000+05:302008-05-12T17:15:00.000+05:30Kalip machu.. :)Jobsyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10915590814721475467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-17329205187454653192008-05-12T17:01:00.000+05:302008-05-12T17:01:00.000+05:30A perfect poem dude... Even though you have used simple words, you have made it look very professional. <BR/><BR/>It is very easy for illiterates like us to understand it. <BR/><BR/>Although it is good, may be you can try something different - like say the reader should be guessing what the poem is all about till he comes to the last paragraph/line - unlike where I got go know here that it is about a butterfly. Or may be you can give a twist in the end...Srivatsahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.com