tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post3401382604420315648..comments2010-05-26T14:48:56.491+05:30Rahul Nairhttps://profiles.google.com/105729598363570599746noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-24566516389554612192010-05-26T14:48:56.431+05:302010-05-26T14:48:56.431+05:30hmm i thought it was ludlum n u jst gav it a o&#39;henry twist...<br />hehe<br />thts rahul..i really lykd it <br />n gng bac 2 days<br />n those fights wit me bro n barbie...ummvidhunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-16829557407730105612008-08-09T22:16:00.000+05:302008-08-09T22:16:00.000+05:30Well written dude! Gripping climax! ;)Deepakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09953262301761983642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-20977726101196553112008-08-02T17:35:00.000+05:302008-08-02T17:35:00.000+05:30@jane: thanks for visting and posting the comment. <BR/><BR/>@Priya:thank you madam.. come again..<BR/><BR/>@sreejith: glad that you liked it! thanks man..Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-8971130537561004012008-08-02T02:07:00.000+05:302008-08-02T02:07:00.000+05:30Great post man! You write very well! And, thanks for the comment on my blog!Sreejith Kumarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06941603815106460360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-36250589372081926052008-07-30T13:09:00.000+05:302008-07-30T13:09:00.000+05:30With this and the previous one you have proved you can write great stories... Keep it up!<BR/><BR/>Liked the names somehow.. Whitesnake and Cage! <BR/><BR/>Introductions for Cage and Whitesnake are good.. Very fine Writing!Priyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13631520052293520539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-23388022784323322742008-07-28T15:39:00.000+05:302008-07-28T15:39:00.000+05:30bwuahhhh.. <BR/>haaa haaaaa. wat suspense... <BR/>cage n whitesnake. on ebehind the other,..<BR/>until kannan came n got me in rage n hissing like whitesnake!rantravereflect/ janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01373924766334558175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-10260824738402610682008-07-26T10:52:00.000+05:302008-07-26T10:52:00.000+05:30@Manja: next time man... :)<BR/>BUt i liked the story myself..hehe<BR/><BR/>@ Anoop: thanks man<BR/><BR/>@Anon : Shari maanyaRahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-35596747140103440122008-07-25T14:12:00.000+05:302008-07-25T14:12:00.000+05:30Good one. The whole thing was set up so nicely that the reader got the jolt kannan had!!!<BR/>Ini ithu aavarthikkaruthu... :)<BR/>-sabariAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-7591084472491151022008-07-23T22:14:00.000+05:302008-07-23T22:14:00.000+05:30great story mate :)<BR/><BR/>keep writingAnoop Engineerhttp://www.dailygyan.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-78036337507275196992008-07-23T16:52:00.000+05:302008-07-23T16:52:00.000+05:30Dude... u spoilt the story by making it a GiJoe game... :) u cud have given a proper ending to it... try writing it again and say something like the rela story of cage and whitesnake..!! :PManjunath RGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02411602361604062965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-35054677965426110172008-07-22T23:45:00.000+05:302008-07-22T23:45:00.000+05:30@Tony : Sorry i couldnt live upto you expectations.. I will try better next time..<BR/>But believe me i had a really good time writing this. I could picture my sister playing and me screwing everything up...<BR/><BR/>@sandeep: thanks maga.<BR/><BR/>@Chandan: Thats the effect i wanted.. Glad that you liked it..Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-46467947614702061732008-07-22T11:48:00.000+05:302008-07-22T11:48:00.000+05:30GI Joe is for Cage and I guess Kannan was using Barbie for Whitesnake.. lolz..<BR/><BR/>Good one dude. Nice twist in the end. When I read that part where Whitesnake gets kicked out of the window, I thought There was a third Agent who was paid to kill the other two assasins.. Too many Robert Ludlum novels you see :)<BR/><BR/>Keep writing such good proses man...Maverickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09950913670610398632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-46925522093773861272008-07-22T11:41:00.000+05:302008-07-22T11:41:00.000+05:30Haha! Great one again. Loved it :)Sandeephttp://sandeep.pixelring.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-26041013927735719122008-07-22T11:33:00.000+05:302008-07-22T11:33:00.000+05:30I second Elizabeth's comment! :)<BR/>Everything went well till i saw the name Kanna there! :)Tonyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14716838424153576869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-30834927049871320752008-07-22T10:37:00.000+05:302008-07-22T10:37:00.000+05:30@Indu : Ya poor Guy, Cage.. But he can come back...<BR/><BR/>@Stygian Sailor : Hey thanks!! ME and competitions.. he he nIce joke.. I couldn't even write compositions properly back at school..<BR/><BR/>@Eli : Di athoru dream alla... Kanna was playing with GI Joe Figures and Lego Blocks.. Like all of us did when we were kids...<BR/>U didnt get it???Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-23789885221925599712008-07-22T10:13:00.000+05:302008-07-22T10:13:00.000+05:30hmmmm...people seems to be attached to the idea of dreams...is it????Elizabeth Josephnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-2675008781799051762008-07-21T22:40:00.000+05:302008-07-21T22:40:00.000+05:30good one again!<BR/>you thought of entering writing competitions?the stygian sailorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14111652720471377986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-52150812616333042422008-07-21T16:32:00.000+05:302008-07-21T16:32:00.000+05:30Feeling bad for Cage :)<BR/><BR/>Good one !!Induhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02739925074766491724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-11762994694683347492008-07-21T16:15:00.000+05:302008-07-21T16:15:00.000+05:30@ srivatsa: you got the twist you wanted right?? <BR/>he he ;)Rahul S. Nairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15781076144849109949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30672408.post-46923803510153468572008-07-21T16:11:00.000+05:302008-07-21T16:11:00.000+05:30This proves without any doubt that you are jobless...Srivatsa K Rhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08047087534552473827noreply@blogger.com