Engulfed in sorrow;shattered and lone.
Life is tough but so am I,
Even if skinless on ice I lie.
Shattered dreams whose wings bled so,
Didn't even show a path to go.
A path I laid through rocks and thorns,
Where it might lead my mind unsure.
The Heart is weak but my Mind is strong,
Hope my decisions never were wrong.
As I tread along the path halfway,
I do wonder if my heart shall cure or never it may.
But before dusk i hope to find a mead,
Where I can rest until again the sun leads.
And it continues.....
--Rahul S. Nair
23 Comments [Post Your Comment]:
The best poem in your Blog... :)
Good one ... I could not comprehend a few of the lines but was able to get most of it.. Keep writing and keep rocking dude!!
I never knew I sit next to a poet. Really good one dude.
"SAHI HAI BEDU..."
Nice poem...
U are superb my roomie! My training u has paid off. Now u have started to write proper poems.! :P
Seriously the poem is awesome!
good poem dude.....y didnt u tell us all these days that u were such a good poet??
btw, u wrote this poem when u were sad is it??? ;D
Hey itz really awesome rahul..din knw u write poems as well..keep up the gud work.. :)
Marvelous dude!!! Pls don’t stop...continue publishing…
For once, you have started writing something sensible... unlike your previous craps(especially LANDLADY(pha pulle!!!)),this one has got substance...put it on our comskys site also ktoda...
Too good Rahul !! U r improving with time.
very beautifully written and absolutely right
Thank You Guys For all those encouraging comments
hey rahul, nice poem yaar....
hey rahul, nice poem yaar....
thanx eli
Aliyaaa.. nee vallya pulli thanne!
thannedei thannee?
woo hoo.!! very deep indeed..! those were some really profound verses.!
good one..your poems are evolving better..btw are u a cetian..got a vague feeling.
nice kettoo :)
Ann:
Thanks for dropping by and finding time to read the blog.
Mathew:
I am tkmite. Thanks for ur comments
Amy:
Thanks for ur comments on most of the blogs...
tats d spirit dude!!! in the begning i thght u were drowning to land of lonlinz but, by the end it shows ur mettle.....
it happns yaaar
nw open d window to ur new life
rocky romeo........
Josef Gr8
Thanks for using my shot :)
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